Monday, May 9, 2011

Alternate Post for Succinctly Yours on May 9

Funeral over at last, the cemetery now got to work putting Big Bad John to rest. It had been a very long day.

10 Comments:

Blogger Susan Fobes said...

Much better than number one!

May 9, 2011 at 6:16 PM  
Blogger SJerZGirl said...

Thanks, Susan. I just drew such a blank when I first looked at the photo.

May 9, 2011 at 6:43 PM  
Anonymous Grandma's Goulash said...

Guess that would make for a long day! :D And I thought they'd just left Big John at the bottom of the mine.

You're doing a fine job with the microficton. Some weeks are easier than others and not everyone will agree which is which. I'm thrilled that I helped to stir those creative juices and am happy you've become a part of Succinctly Yours.

May 9, 2011 at 8:33 PM  
Blogger Lisa Ricard Claro said...

I actually liked your first one...I thought it sounded so official! This one is excellent as well...I'm thinking Big John is veeerrry big, 'cause that's a huge hole! :)

May 9, 2011 at 9:53 PM  
Blogger SJerZGirl said...

Thanks, everyone. I was actually going for something similar to a realistic news release on the first one. As for Big Bad John being at the bottom of the mine, I think this was his son. Thanks, Grandma. It's kind of fun coming up with something with each photo.

May 9, 2011 at 10:00 PM  
Blogger Pooch said...

HUGE job indeed! Good idea for this pic!
:)

May 9, 2011 at 10:11 PM  
Blogger Pat said...

The chorus of that song "Big John" now keeps going through my head. Good one! I do like it better than your first one, too.

May 9, 2011 at 11:37 PM  
Blogger Kay L. Davies said...

EXcellent!! I like both of your submissions, though.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

May 9, 2011 at 11:50 PM  
Blogger SparkleFarkle said...

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May 10, 2011 at 12:33 AM  
Blogger Lynette Killam said...

Another great entry...good for you writing two! Now I have that song stuck in my head for the rest of the evening...LOL!

May 11, 2011 at 1:29 AM  

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