Grandma of Grandma's Goulash provides a new photo prompt each week for us to tell a story that we see within it in 140 characters or less (or 140 words if need be). She also gives us a "word of the week" to attempt to work into the story. Join me now for the story I discovered in this photo.
Word of the Week – glisten
Paolo stared at her walking along the glistening street’s divider. Could it really be? He hadn’t seen her since he was a child. “É a mama!” Labels: fiction, flash, flash fiction, grandmas goulash, photo trigger
11 Comments:
What a suprise! I hope he stopped safely.
What a shock - hope he's right.
Well done. That's a terrific story starter, too, as it might play out any number of different ways!
Now there is a great beginning. I want to know where it goes.
That's enough to make him fall off his bike! LOL
Now I want to know the rest of the story. You piqued my interest!
What a beginning...:-)
Yes, Wendy, this is definitely a beginning: it really could be the start of something! Good one.
— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
One definitely wants to read more and have questions answered, like what has kept them apart all these years! Nicely done...:)
You've certainly managed to raise a lot of curiosity with this one. Like the others, I'd like to hear more.
Über-momsies will go to the end of the Earth for their sons. Looks like this one might have finally just got back from buying socks and underwear for her dear boy? LOL!
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