Monday, May 30, 2011

Succinctly Yours for May 30 - Mama

Grandma of Grandma's Goulash provides a new photo prompt each week for us to tell a story that we see within it in 140 characters or less (or 140 words if need be). She also gives us a "word of the week" to attempt to work into the story. Join me now for the story I discovered in this photo.


Word of the Week – glisten

Paolo stared at her walking along the glistening street’s divider. Could it really be? He hadn’t seen her since he was a child. “É a mama!” 

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11 Comments:

Anonymous Helen Howell said...

What a suprise! I hope he stopped safely.

May 30, 2011 at 1:37 AM  
Blogger jabblog said...

What a shock - hope he's right.

May 30, 2011 at 5:55 AM  
Blogger Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Well done. That's a terrific story starter, too, as it might play out any number of different ways!

May 30, 2011 at 9:38 AM  
Blogger Sharkbytes said...

Now there is a great beginning. I want to know where it goes.

May 30, 2011 at 10:55 AM  
Blogger Akelamalu said...

That's enough to make him fall off his bike! LOL

May 30, 2011 at 11:11 AM  
Blogger Pat said...

Now I want to know the rest of the story. You piqued my interest!

May 30, 2011 at 2:57 PM  
Blogger Anyes said...

What a beginning...:-)

May 30, 2011 at 4:04 PM  
Blogger Kay L. Davies said...

Yes, Wendy, this is definitely a beginning: it really could be the start of something! Good one.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

May 30, 2011 at 11:06 PM  
Blogger Lynette Killam said...

One definitely wants to read more and have questions answered, like what has kept them apart all these years! Nicely done...:)

May 30, 2011 at 11:51 PM  
Anonymous Grandma's Goulash said...

You've certainly managed to raise a lot of curiosity with this one. Like the others, I'd like to hear more.

May 31, 2011 at 1:34 AM  
Blogger SparkleFarkel said...

Über-momsies will go to the end of the Earth for their sons. Looks like this one might have finally just got back from buying socks and underwear for her dear boy? LOL!

May 31, 2011 at 3:33 AM  

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